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love at first sight - undity by ~n-o-dizzy:iconn-o-dizzy:

Categories Fan Art > Traditional Art > Drawings > Miscellaneous

©2008 ~n-o-dizzy
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Submitted: May 16
File Size: 303 KB
Image Size: 105 KB
Resolution: 800×1196
Comments: 11
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Make: HP
Model: HP pstc4200
Date Picture Taken: May 16, 2008, 10:05:18 AM

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this one is made for a girlfriend
i will color it after
all comments are welcome
please, i need some advice to improve this one :innocent:

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~Trunkinquan:iconTrunkinquan: May 16, 2008, 1:35:16 AM
Your girlfriend ? You are fast to catch it on !! Coloris le bien mec, c'est son style de dessin en plus. Je travaille là, tu pourras passer demain chez moi. :bye:
~n-o-dizzy:iconn-o-dizzy: May 16, 2008, 1:44:17 AM
dem1 chui dead mec , cour samedi , ça tue ^^
dommage que je pourrait pas test fatal shadow avec ton disciple :XD:
~AOIshuro:iconAOIshuro: May 16, 2008, 2:31:20 AM Mood: Joy
Yeah ! Some advices; the shape of the body is good, but the lines of hair has to become refined in the rear. The chin is a bit too sharp. Good work anyway Kami-sama !

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~Superporing:iconSuperporing: May 16, 2008, 4:47:30 AM
T'as des probs pour les profils mon pauvre vieux sage XD du coup les proportions par rapport au corps c'est un peu space. C'est quand meme meeugnon ^^ rah lala

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~dazedgumball:icondazedgumball: May 16, 2008, 11:10:29 AM
It seems that the heads aren't proportional to the body. The chins are bit too sharp. Other than that, it is coming along quite well.

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~n-o-dizzy:iconn-o-dizzy: May 16, 2008, 10:39:11 PM
thx for the advice, i will try to improve the lineart because i'm still noob ^^
i guess i need more practices -_-'
~n-o-dizzy:iconn-o-dizzy: May 16, 2008, 10:40:47 PM
rah lala , dur dur depuis ces derniers temps , dire que j'avait po de problème comme ça !!!!!!!!
toi qui a un corp de meuf , conseille moi quelque chose pour la fille ^^
~n-o-dizzy:iconn-o-dizzy: May 16, 2008, 10:42:32 PM
thx bro kami-sama , but the kami-sama you think about is still noob ^^
~Superporing:iconSuperporing: May 17, 2008, 9:03:15 AM
Aw !! Laisse mon corps de femelette en dehors de ça dizzy d'amur !! *XDDD*
Bah deja la tete est un peu grosse pas rapport au corps mais tu peux rectifier ça... En refaisant tout le corps XD et oui, le cou est trop court à mon avis, l'epaule tombera donc plus bas.
Et puis en commentaires comme ça c'est pas évident T_T Si tu veux vraiment des conseils tu me demanderas pas msn '-_-

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I'm carefree... I'm pink with a red cloak and big black eyes... I'm ... SUPER PORING !!
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